I think that the item is funny and the words that go with it are even more funny. Its like what the company actually wants to say but doesn't. They just sugar code it to make it better.
I like the words on this can, but I wish the design was equally obnoxious and disconcerting. The picture of guts could be more detailed. Be careful with where your white space is. This is a really good concept. Also, good repetition of shape and color.
You have a really funny add started. I think you need to work on the placement of the testimonial, warning, and front add- right now it looks unfinished. I really like the illustration of the digestive system though. I can tell what it is, though it's not so offensively obvious at first glance. Nice work thus far.
Very good use of humor. For the image of guts, creating it traditionally and scanning it in or using photoshop would probably give you a better graphic. You can really increase the size contrast with "gurgle guts" to draw more attention to your product name. There is currently a lot of trapped white space underneath the words.
You have a hilarious start to a product here. I think if you were to work on the layout of your elements and incorporate a strong use of text as part of the design you'd have a great label! I like your choice of colors used already, maybe adding another color or background would enhance it even more.
Hahaha. This is funny. I like the concept and idea of this and the text looks good. The colors are contrasting with each other which brings the viewers eyes in but I think its kind of plain on the front. Maybe if you had a bright or dark background color and then did more with the text and the intestines on the front? I think its a good start!
I like this! Very humorous. Its a great start to a design, for sure, I think it could be stronger if you increased the size of the product title and made the font your own! The image is nice too, you should make it even more of a focal point by adding lots of color.
I think that the item is funny and the words that go with it are even more funny. Its like what the company actually wants to say but doesn't. They just sugar code it to make it better.
ReplyDeleteI like the words on this can, but I wish the design was equally obnoxious and disconcerting. The picture of guts could be more detailed. Be careful with where your white space is. This is a really good concept. Also, good repetition of shape and color.
ReplyDeleteYou have a really funny add started. I think you need to work on the placement of the testimonial, warning, and front add- right now it looks unfinished. I really like the illustration of the digestive system though. I can tell what it is, though it's not so offensively obvious at first glance. Nice work thus far.
ReplyDeleteVery good use of humor. For the image of guts, creating it traditionally and scanning it in or using photoshop would probably give you a better graphic. You can really increase the size contrast with "gurgle guts" to draw more attention to your product name. There is currently a lot of trapped white space underneath the words.
ReplyDeleteYou have a hilarious start to a product here. I think if you were to work on the layout of your elements and incorporate a strong use of text as part of the design you'd have a great label! I like your choice of colors used already, maybe adding another color or background would enhance it even more.
ReplyDeleteHahaha. This is funny. I like the concept and idea of this and the text looks good. The colors are contrasting with each other which brings the viewers eyes in but I think its kind of plain on the front. Maybe if you had a bright or dark background color and then did more with the text and the intestines on the front? I think its a good start!
ReplyDeleteI like this! Very humorous. Its a great start to a design, for sure, I think it could be stronger if you increased the size of the product title and made the font your own! The image is nice too, you should make it even more of a focal point by adding lots of color.
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